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Monday, February 23, 2009

MFM - One Step at a Time

I stripped naked as she ordered, one piece of clothing after another folded neatly and placed behind me until I was shivering in the cool breeze. I knelt down as she ordered. I closed my eyes as she ordered. I felt the silk of the scarf cover them and then she tied it tightly behind my head. I put my hands behind my back as she ordered. I felt the second bit of silk wrapping around my wrists as she bound them together. I stood at her command and felt her hand laid gently against my lower back.

“Now, walk forward slowly, one step at a time and I want you to count to ten before you take another. Do not stop stepping forward until I tell you.” She said softly as she leaned just a bit against me. Her warm body was such a contrast against my cooling skin. My heart was racing, I could feel the blood pounding making my head feel light. My breath was coming faster. We had the conversation only last night about trust. I had said simply, that I trusted her completely. Then I had added to that and said I trusted her completely with my life. She had said simply that we would see.

I didn't even answer her order to take that first step, I didn't offer her the customary, “Yes, Mistress.” I simply began letting my actions speak. I took one step, counted to ten, took another step, counted to ten, and it was on the third step when I felt the cold ocean water on my feet. It took my breath away. I counted to ten and took another step.

Trusted her completely. Yes, we would see. With my life. Yes, we would see. And I took another step as she ordered.


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Written for Microfantasy Monday #16 at the Sweltering Celt. This week's theme waterside.

9 comments:

Southern Sage said...

Excellent fantasy!
I don't know if I would have as much trust!

GTPeach said...

oh wow. that is amazing. partially because i know my partner and i trust each other exactly that much, and also just because... wow it sweeps you away

GTPeach said...

by the way, i linked your mfm in mine because our ideas were so similar, but yours is much better.

vanimp said...

Oooo I like these ones, completely playing with your head, it's all about trust. Wonderful piece xxx

bdenied said...

the last three posts are very hot...great writing and great photos too

dragonmage said...

Great MfM! I love the play on trust. ^_^

Thursday's Child said...

Beautifully done - I can almost feel the moment the cold water touches your foot.

Kyle said...

oooooh, that is goood. In a very small number of words, you draw us completely in.

Ang said...

I don't know how I missed this one, but I'm glad I saw it just now! Amazing! Very well done, I love the incorporation of trust.