I stripped naked as she ordered, one piece of clothing after another folded neatly and placed behind me until I was shivering in the cool breeze. I knelt down as she ordered. I closed my eyes as she ordered. I felt the silk of the scarf cover them and then she tied it tightly behind my head. I put my hands behind my back as she ordered. I felt the second bit of silk wrapping around my wrists as she bound them together. I stood at her command and felt her hand laid gently against my lower back.
“Now, walk forward slowly, one step at a time and I want you to count to ten before you take another. Do not stop stepping forward until I tell you.” She said softly as she leaned just a bit against me. Her warm body was such a contrast against my cooling skin. My heart was racing, I could feel the blood pounding making my head feel light. My breath was coming faster. We had the conversation only last night about trust. I had said simply, that I trusted her completely. Then I had added to that and said I trusted her completely with my life. She had said simply that we would see.
I didn't even answer her order to take that first step, I didn't offer her the customary, “Yes, Mistress.” I simply began letting my actions speak. I took one step, counted to ten, took another step, counted to ten, and it was on the third step when I felt the cold ocean water on my feet. It took my breath away. I counted to ten and took another step.
Trusted her completely. Yes, we would see. With my life. Yes, we would see. And I took another step as she ordered.
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Written for Microfantasy Monday #16 at the Sweltering Celt. This week's theme waterside.
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9 comments:
Excellent fantasy!
I don't know if I would have as much trust!
oh wow. that is amazing. partially because i know my partner and i trust each other exactly that much, and also just because... wow it sweeps you away
by the way, i linked your mfm in mine because our ideas were so similar, but yours is much better.
Oooo I like these ones, completely playing with your head, it's all about trust. Wonderful piece xxx
the last three posts are very hot...great writing and great photos too
Great MfM! I love the play on trust. ^_^
Beautifully done - I can almost feel the moment the cold water touches your foot.
oooooh, that is goood. In a very small number of words, you draw us completely in.
I don't know how I missed this one, but I'm glad I saw it just now! Amazing! Very well done, I love the incorporation of trust.
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